First of all, a big thanks to all of you who made suggestions for my next stab at this and I have tried to incorporate them into my reworking. The main things for me were to increase the value range and try to retain some hint of colour in the shadow side of the buildings. I also tried to create some shadow in front of the buildings. It still needs one or two touches but I think it's almost at a finish.
I have sketch books full of work I've done in Venice and I may spend a bit of time over the next month or so working some of them up into finished paintings.
Salute Sunset - Oil on stretched linen 16" x 12"